The story is coherent! Though, I still don't think it's as humorous as we probably thought it would be. The middle part with the jailed loris is a little confusing. The cut to the jailed loris in the middle seems a little out of place? Is the jailed loris trapped inside the tree? Is the jailed loris the badger or is it the loris from the beginning? I liked the different methods of getting up the tree especially the balloon part and that transition. soo good.
Thanks for the general map. Can't wait to see the next pass at boards. Looking better so far. :)
Oooh not bad!
ReplyDeleteThe story is coherent! Though, I still don't think it's as humorous as we probably thought it would be. The middle part with the jailed loris is a little confusing. The cut to the jailed loris in the middle seems a little out of place? Is the jailed loris trapped inside the tree? Is the jailed loris the badger or is it the loris from the beginning?
I liked the different methods of getting up the tree especially the balloon part and that transition. soo good.
Thanks for the general map. Can't wait to see the next pass at boards. Looking better so far. :)